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Contributed by Rhei76 on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:51:23 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Walking in the clouds. dreaming of myself. just kickin' around, listen to TOOL. Thinking I'm just to dark for you.

Sailing on the waters visitin' old lovers under the sky. hoping on hope but lossing on time. then she stopt and spoke. Hatred, anger, insanity flow! she's to hyped up skitzen thru a reality I left behind.

sitting on my bed. dreaming dreams of myself. wondering if i'll ever have some one else. some one with out my vice, with out my continues false tragedies.

Then I awake on the thin limb of some old die-ing tree. I look down wishing I was a leaf, wishing I could just cut ties and float away.

And it comes to me as I open my eyes...

Copyright © Rhei76 ... [ 2004-03-19 17:51:23]
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Re: Still searching (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 02:46:18 PM AEST
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i was instantly connected when i read that first line/stanza
"Thinking I'm just to dark for you. "
and to my surprise - it only gets better!

oh, this was just wonderful.
"dreaming dreams of myself"

i loved this, a lot.

the last stanza hit my like a wall, and i couldn't believe what i had just read.

now that your head has swollen to the size of the moon,
i will say you really are a phenomenal writer.

- Bethani -

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