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scream
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:35:25 PM in AEST
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Beautiful pain embraces my body and I am numb
Bleeding away my soul from the inside
My words seep from me like a disease
And my heart aches and I can’t breathe
Blissful agony, twisted metal fantasies
Barbed wire games, razorblade chains
Scream
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wyrd_faerie
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2004-03-19 17:35:25]
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Re: scream
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:45:16 PM AEST
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wow intense write high volume in a small space
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Re: scream
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:57:09 PM AEST
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| I like it! just the right words to feel. |
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Re: scream
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:08:17 PM AEST
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so much agony packed into a small space. I wish my computer was working better so we could talk. Anyway a beautiful poem I hope it is like a release for you as it is for me. Take care of yerself.
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Re: scream
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:11:56 PM AEST
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| great! i'd never go this far to write about these issues, so it's cool for me read it... |
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Re: scream
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by Kie on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:56:30 PM AEST
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| This gave me goosebumps. Well done. Kie |
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Re: scream
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by shasha07 on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 07:35:46 PM AEST
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Sounds like a couple people i know, i like it, a lot of pain.
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