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When Can I?
Contributed by
Peaches05
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 03:04:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When we are so far apart
Can lonliness mend our tender hearts
I think of you and shed a tear
Sleep has come but a dream
All of us is like a rose
Night has come so I must close
With this I leave you one thought in mind
You need to read the first word of every line
Copyright ©
Peaches05
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2004-03-19 15:04:04]
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Re: When Can I?
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by dolly_dagger on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 03:16:59 PM AEST
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this is cleverly structured and was interesting to read :)
inspiring.
thank you
xxxx |
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Re: When Can I?
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by Necromant on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 03:56:47 PM AEST
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Short sweet and thoughtful! Loved it! Great write ;)
Anne :D |
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Re: When Can I?
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by TwEeK on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 04:04:15 PM AEST
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| i like this, smart, yet emotional, i wonder how long this took u to write |
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Re: When Can I?
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by discantbelife on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 04:59:41 PM AEST
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| wonderful, just wonderful im looking foward to read more our you wonderful poems |
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