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princess
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 02:55:39 PM in AEST
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Princess, you're a *****.
And don't tell me I shouldn't say that, Ducky,
'Cause I'm your little Widget and I'll shake stuff up
if I need to. I can't pretend she's not here.
You can't pretend I'm not here.
Even if I'm sinking to the bottom of the can,
the bottom of the lake,
You'll still hear me chinking against the sides, clicking on the bottom of your unsteady canoe.
Soft Plastic Perez is nothing on me.
And you know it. But would you deny it?
Would you deny in the heat of a secret look, concealed in the frenzy of the dancing and the drinking and the mud?
Would you deny it in your head?
Your fingers? Through tangled wires?
I'll never deny how much I love(d?) you.
Choice is a gift, so
Don't get absorbed in its shiny wrapping.
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
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2004-03-19 14:55:39]
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Re: princess
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by Necromant on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 03:58:56 PM AEST
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What an original poem. Had to re-read it more than once. Kinda liked it! Keep it up ;)
Anne :D |
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Re: princess
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by little_genna on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:27:47 PM AEST
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directed at a 'friend' of ours Ellie?
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Re: princess
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:08:06 AM AEST
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| very very good, you'll never be soft plastic darling! and if he doesnt see that, then maybe you should be with someone who can take a bit more density, or depth. sorry! love the 'don't get absorbed in its shiny wrapping' ... x |
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Re: princess
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:15:00 AM AEST
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Political, personal and thoroughly absorbing.
I've read LGenna's response. I'm nosey, and loving it.
Thanks for sharing this. |
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