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Closed Eyes
Contributed by
Hoots
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:17:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A black room sits in silence,
The walls, so cold, so bare;
Alone, I sit on hardened ground,
Alone, I sit and stare.
A life so dim and pointless,
Don't need a second glance;
It's all the same, it's all downhill,
Redemption, not a chance.
And I can't see a single thing,
My eyes are shut so tight;
No worries, though it's better dark
Than blinded by the light.
Won't let another soul in sight,
There's no need for a door;
It's safe this way, it's better alone
Than hurting even more.
So in this room I'll live my life,
Blind hope, it only dies;
No added pain when you're alone
And living with closed eyes.
Copyright ©
Hoots
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2004-03-19 13:17:25]
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Re: Closed Eyes
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:23:55 PM AEST
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| very good! and interesting. this i s what i do, only with me i keep a hard, but breakable shell/wall around me.when i'm alone i do what you do. |
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Re: Closed Eyes
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by justjames on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:42:44 PM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: Closed Eyes
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by Putteragain on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 03:06:15 PM AEST
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your poetry is got my mind thinking i like that
michelle |
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Re: Closed Eyes
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:49:47 PM AEST
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Not too long but very direct.. Me likes lol..Gives a great visual and relates lots with certain thoughts of mine.
Wonderful Write
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Re: Closed Eyes
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 10:13:59 PM AEST
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| Good poem! I really liked it. It was beautifully written. |
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Re: Closed Eyes
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:14:00 PM AEST
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Great poem!!! i loved it!!!
Lots of Love
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