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Let me Save You
Contributed by
liquidchaos
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:37:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I cannot take this any longer
The urge to kill is getting stronger
All these things that have happened to you
All these things that we've been through
An unfair hand that you were dealt
All these emotions I know you felt
Standing here watching you die,
Every word to escape you makes me cry.
Every day a peace of me dies with you
And I'll never return to this never ending hell.
Thinking of you--this wall begins to crumble.
Desperation, there's nothing I can do.
For you.
Everything, I'm told it has a meaning.
But how the hell can they see what I'm feeling?
Crying, dying, bleeding, seething
I feel your passion and fire receeding.
Everything--It all just seems to fade.
Thoughts pour out as tears cascade
No point to my actions.
You're too far gone from here.
You've left me hollow, broken, alone
And all that's left is fear.
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2004-03-19 12:37:19]
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Re: Let me Save You
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by adsalamon on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:00:33 PM AEST
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Re: Let me Save You
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by arden on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 12:41:32 PM AEST
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very dark and sad. i liked this one well done.
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Re: Let me Save You
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 12:37:08 PM AEST
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Arden said I should check out your stuff, and she was right. This is both sad and fasinating. Heartwrenching really. Nice work.
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