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the mirror of your soul
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 08:26:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you have your arms around me
I can feel the love we have
Whenever I hear you speak
I hear a soft and tender voice
When I look at your face
I see the face of an angel
Whenever I touch you
I touch the body of a God
And everytime I say "I love you"
you say "I love you too"
But how can you expect me
to believe in all those lies
Because everytime you hit me
I see the Devil in your eyes
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2004-03-19 08:26:02]
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Re: the mirror of your soul
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by Necromant on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:12:12 PM AEST
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What an unexpected ending! My i'm still under mild shock. Very good poem! Keep it up! (I hope that everything is ok)
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Re: the mirror of your soul
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 02:10:02 PM AEST
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May the arms that surround you be arms of love. I hope it all works out for you.
Take care.
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Re: the mirror of your soul
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:47:29 PM AEST
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Great impact at the end, so unexpected......as being hit by someone who says they love you must be.
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Re: the mirror of your soul
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by silent on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:26:50 AM AEST
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ooppss, i thought it was fairly good until i got hit in the head with the last bit, that was a huge impact, reflecting again upon the poem. Very well done.....That last bit made it 5 stars for me for sure
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