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My never-ending play

Contributed by Necromant on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:53:46 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Deep into the darkened sacred mist of my heart,
Plays a secret fantasy with you acting as the main part,
I wish to draw the curtains and expose it to public view,
But how can I do this without the risk of loosing you?

This pantomime will always play in my imagination,
Even in stormy sunny days and in utter desolation,
Let it be a tragedy or comedy, I don’t care! as long as it is done,
Beginning and ending with you exiting a scene and entering a new one





Copyright © Necromant ... [ 2004-03-19 06:53:46]
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Re: My never-ending play (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:59:51 AM AEST
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Loved this scene...... good poem...
Jenni


Re: My never-ending play (User Rating: 1 )
by faithmairee on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 07:01:40 AM AEST
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intriguing poem...your delivery was right on target...great job!

Faith


Re: My never-ending play (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 07:20:52 AM AEST
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ahha...very attractive scene..loved this.. venkat


Re: My never-ending play (User Rating: 1 )
by adsalamon on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:15:42 PM AEST
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nice poem


Re: My never-ending play (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 03:47:02 PM AEST
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I could relate to this one strongly. Well done. Kie


Re: My never-ending play (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 04:55:33 PM AEST
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well done glad you are experimenting its good

michelle


Re: My never-ending play (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 07:10:53 AM AEST
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Lifes just one big act! great write.

wildejohnny.


Re: My never-ending play (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:43:18 PM AEST
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Perchance do you have a recurring dream? or is that the mark of an obsessive soul. I dunno.. reading this poem I get this weird feeling of Twin Peaks like vibe...of that continous running through stages in and stages out all covered with red curtains and with swing music about. .. chasing after that Laura Palmer all in clear plastic her dead body's shroud. Weird I know.. just the feelings that appear. Note: Twin Peak...the series and movie about the murder...starring Kyle Mclachlan I think...or whatever his name was... the same guy who played Paul Atreides...aka muaddib in the earlier Dune movies...the original one not the new remakes.


Re: My never-ending play (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 02:44:48 AM AEST
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WRITTEN KINDA DIFFERENT BUT A SMASH HIT! YOU DID REAL GOOD WITH THIS ONE!! BRAVO!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!


Re: My never-ending play (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 05:04:08 AM AEST
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Good work!
Like Jenni, I like the scene.
luv, huggs,
emy
Thanks for your comment on my poem and having fun singing it.


Re: My never-ending play (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 08:20:36 PM AEST
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damn it! all these people stole my lines and left me nothing more to say!^_^ oh well, I guess a big round of aplause for such wonderful show will do the trick?




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