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Tolerance
Contributed by
Necromant
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:21:48 AM in AEST
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The final sketches for the plan were being laid,
Tomorrow the price for his abnormality will be paid,
For his foolish honesty in an unsupervised moment,
His life will be put into constant torment
“I’m gay” was revealed out of a game of truth or dare,
For acceptance he asked as he stripped his soul bare,
Disgusted looks and foul words was all he received,
They spit on him and left, how could he be so deceived!
Crying, dying and alone, one day he will be found,
Raped, battered beaten and unceremoniously bound,
These will be his departing words in his final speech,
“Tolerance is still something we have to teach”
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Necromant
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Re: Tolerance
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by venkat on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 07:03:53 AM AEST
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| your poem says they are treated brutally..it is inhuman..and pathetic..it is well written and well wrapped.. venkat |
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Re: Tolerance
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 07:22:39 AM AEST
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Well written..and so true..... People can be so cruel....
Jenni |
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Re: Tolerance
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 08:35:03 AM AEST
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This poem portraits the truth of a closed minded society> Its teerrible to think people are capable of such things, may this messege arrive to those who don't think about these things. Good write
Becky |
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Re: Tolerance
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by MyLastBreath on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 08:41:19 PM AEST
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| I like your writing style |
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Re: Tolerance
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:12:17 AM AEST
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Wow this is so sad.
I say live and let live.
Some people are so cruel.
Good write even tho sad.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Tolerance
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:24:11 PM AEST
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Sad, starkly and blatantly honest, and oh how true . . . nice job. Everyone should read this.
--Nora |
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Re: Tolerance
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:36:36 PM AEST
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it's a shame human nature on the whole wants to destroy anything it doesn't understand a very well written piece.
wildej. |
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Re: Tolerance
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:46:05 PM AEST
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| Well written piece Anne. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Tolerance
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by EternalNight4x on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:09:28 PM AEST
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| powerful write..i very much enjoyed it, I don't think it is right to torment others for what they can't control...and humanity does need to learn tolerance, then maybe we would be able to get along better....excellent write keep posting |
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