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I can't convince you
Contributed by
Jade
on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:05:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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No matter what I do
I can’t convince you I’m true
No matter what I say
There is no way
To show you
I’m true
You will never believe in me
This I now see
There is no end in sight
To this battle I fight
I’m no longer strong
Because I’ve been fighting so long
I find myself giving in
And letting the weakness win
Becoming something I’m not
To give you what you want
I no longer want to go anywhere
Because I care
Of how it makes you feel
Heh, and with all this you still can’t see my love is real.
Copyright ©
Jade
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2004-03-19 01:05:13]
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Re: I can't convince you
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by Remy on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:12:50 AM AEST
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that's where you draw the line buddy, stay true to yourself - no compromise... whoa, whoopsie, thinking aloud here... lol!! good write, i think i liked it a lil too much there! ;0)
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Re: I can't convince you
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:24:57 AM AEST
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I really liked this. You expressed it very well...
'Heh, and with all this you still can’t see my love is real.'
Sometimes you don't know until it's gone.
Sometimes things also get messed up and the other person stops seeing what should be obvious to them. Hope it works out. |
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