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Missing You
Contributed by
jamsters
on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:10:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You are
gone
No reason
to live
Wish
I was
six feet
under with
you
Finger curled
the trigger
I shall see you
soon
Copyright ©
jamsters
... [
2004-03-19 00:10:02]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Missing You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:35:58 AM AEST
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nooooo... don't do it! drop the gun! right now, drop it! i'm warning you... lol, couldn't help myself. good writing, i love it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Missing You
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 11:44:30 PM AEST
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| WOW! That was REALLY powerful. There were so little words, but they made you feel so much, just-- BOOM! *no words* Great write!!! |
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Re: Missing You
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by Crash on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:03:42 AM AEST
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| Short. Sweet. Dark. Emotional. This poem has such great write flow, even tho it is rather short. To want to join a friend who has passed, easy to relate to. |
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