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The Last Teat Shed
Contributed by
jamsters
on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:05:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I watch
while you
flop like a
fish
Tears
spill from
your eyes
Three inches
off
the ground
Held by a
rope around
your
neck
You know
what you
did and you
know you
deserve
this
Copyright ©
jamsters
... [
2004-03-19 00:05:26]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Last Teat Shed
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:07:25 AM AEST
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*ponders* scary writing... *backs away slowly* ... good writing, but scary... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: The Last Teat Shed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:14:41 AM AEST
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Lol
thats some angry writing there.
But still it's very nicely written
good job. |
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