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Darkness
Contributed by
xBeautyForAshesx
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:52:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Darkness.
Conquers the sun, takes over the sky.
The forest is dark tonight
Gloomy walkways.
I glide upon the blackened steps.
Hoping the dark wont devour me
Devour me alive
Still Breathing
It creeps slowly, closer to me.
Tip-toeing, so I wont hear it
Only waiting to pounce on me
Tackle me down.
I approach my home,safe at last
But,no. The dark is not done with me yet
Now I must run
But the dark is chasing after me
Finally,it reachs me,im cornered no way out
Now it pounces on me
Torments me till I scream
And I finally I wake up,
And realize,
It was all just a dream
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2004-03-18 23:52:06]
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Re: Darkness
(User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:14:31 AM AEST
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Good job... keep writing...
I LOVED IT!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Darkness
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:47:02 AM AEST
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| reading it is like watching a short movie, hehe, a horror movie?^_^ very nice with a good rythme....... Hehehe, you know what? if you want to make it more 'dark', may be you can wake up from the dream and find youself surround by the darkness again, hehe, BOO! ^_^ |
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