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Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part Two
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:22:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Early morning,
Cigarette smoking in my hand,
I've been up all night.
Nirvana is playing on my radio.
I'm still looking for God-knows-what,
For all I know I've already found it.
I feel like there's a face
Inside me,
A second personality.
Which one will dominate my day?
The birds outside are chirping,
Spring is almost here,
But the birds are getting pretty annoying.
I'll miss them if I ever
Move into the city.
I feel a bit psychotic.
I've decided what to do
About the girl,
The one I love but who hates me,
To be refered to hereafter as 'her'
Or 'the girl.'
She'll see what she's given up,
I'll go on loving her.
Now I have a headache.
I need sleep.
Everything is going dark.
I let it,
Let the darkness overcome me.
Before I go I say a short prayer
For one of my friends.
I've put out the cigarette,
I shouldn't be smoking.
Everything's almost completely dark now,
What I can see is blood red,
It looks like my blood.
I'm burning, it seems.
There's no fire,
But I feel like I'm
On fire...
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Solmyr1404
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2004-03-18 23:22:07]
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Re: Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part Two
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by kailadragon on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:44:45 PM AEST
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| okay okay, so I was wrong, these ARE good writes....... |
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Re: Love In The Fire Of Darkness Part Two
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:23:01 PM AEST
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very good. keep them coming.
o ya. nirvana is such a good cd. which ones do u hav?
~allyson~ |
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