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Feelings
Contributed by
juggalette_chick666pk
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:58:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Whispers of the untouched,
life and dreams become impossible to pursue.
The dark become the one the only,
Coldness brings chills upon the the spine,
Tears dry out,
Feelings and emotiions grow stronger with every step one takes,
Days longer,
every day is harder to find what one looks for,
For whatever reason,
I sit in my room,
I look up at the ceiling,
Pondering what will happens next,
Death?
Life?
No, just heart breaks and tears,
So I just sit here,
on my floor,
Staring at my ceiling till one of importance comes in and holds my hand and cries upon my shoulder,
Hand in hand we walk into the dark till it starts all over again.
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juggalette_chick666pk
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2004-03-18 21:58:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Feelings
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:31:23 PM AEST (User
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it is hard to break free of the darkness...but it is possible ...and once you find that light you know you never want to go back
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Re: Feelings
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:04:38 AM AEST (User
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I love the end!! Very touching write.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Feelings
(User Rating: 1 ) by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:17:31 AM AEST (User
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We all go through that at sometimes in our lives.You just have to take a day at a time.
nicely written poem though :) |
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