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This Time
Contributed by
stalkee
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:40:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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This time there is no lie
It's finally out of lives
It's finally over
There's no more sorrow,
or dreams about tomorrow
I'm through with this
As for all the pieces of my soul...
I'm mending them
Mending them again
No more tears,
no more fears - from this
This time there is no doubt
All the chemicals have run out
And now I can sigh
There's no more regrets
No more need to fret
I can smile
As for all the pieces of my heart...
I'm mending them
Mending them again
No more tears,
no more fears - from this
Copyright ©
stalkee
... [
2004-03-18 21:40:09]
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Re: This Time
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:45:28 PM AEST
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A refreshingly good, happy write... Thanks for sharing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: This Time
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:01:24 PM AEST
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Good to hear a poem like this great write
-Victoria- |
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Re: This Time
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:33:13 PM AEST
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well written
Shari |
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Re: This Time
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:58:21 PM AEST
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| reminds me of something I wrote on the old site by the same title.... this is good, I really like it. Keep it up! |
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Re: This Time
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:03:40 AM AEST
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Beautiful! You're making me envious. Wonderfully written.
~ Moonlit |
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