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WILL ANYONE NOTICE?
Contributed by
Rous
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 07:10:37 PM in AEST
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The clothes are washed and folded neat
Supper's on the table, ready to eat
Will anyone notice if I retreat?
The radio's playing, a favorite song
Everyone's busy, on the run
Will anyone notice if I'm gone
The one who matters doesn't seem to care
The others scattered, who knows where
Will they notice, if I'm not there?
The older I get the greater the distance grows
A permanent solution is not the answer, I know
But would they notice, if I just go?
God seems distant, the fault lies with me
As well as my other problems, I know, but you see
Would anyone notice, if I ceased to be?
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Rous
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2004-03-18 19:10:37]
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Re: WILL ANYONE NOTICE?
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by shasha07 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 07:49:18 PM AEST
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That poem reminds me of how i feel, i loved the poem, nice really great.
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Re: WILL ANYONE NOTICE?
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:28:14 PM AEST
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Nice write .
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Re: WILL ANYONE NOTICE?
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by Kie on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:39:34 PM AEST
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| Heartwrenching this poem is. It screams of deep lonliness and it was a great poem to read. You touched me with this one. Welcome to YPDC, I can tell I am going to be a huge fan. Kie |
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Re: WILL ANYONE NOTICE?
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by Rous on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 07:48:18 AM AEST
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Thank you for the comments. I still feel this way, but not as much anymore. With two gone, I just patiently wait for the other two to leave. *rolls eyes and smiles*
Rous |
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