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Money Worries
Contributed by
AliB
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:35:51 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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Money comes to money
Of which I have not any
With debts and fines I worry
The Lotto I must win in a hurry
A job, I am not ready
Although the money would be steady
To stay at home I have to
'Til some problems have been seen to
I really can't wait to start work
But responsibilities I will not shirk
So until I can open a new door
It looks like I will remain poor
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Re: Money Worries
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:45:33 PM AEST (User
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you call yourself poor? have you ever been so poor you coulndt afford underware....tampons.....to go to the dentist when your teeth are roting out of your head? probably not.........i hope you find a good job and dont end up like i did |
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Re: Money Worries
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:03:16 PM AEST (User
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Okay I was going to complain about having a mortgage and an outrageous car payment. But after reading that anonymous comment I think i'll just shush. I did relate to your poem and you know it would be nice to win the lottery but then I think i'd just have more problems... (LOL) Kie |
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Re: Money Worries
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dawny on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:33:38 AM AEST (User
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I would so love to win the lottery!!
Really good poem, I agree completely
Love Dawny x |
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