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I am a volcano
Contributed by
AliB
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:12:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As you stroke my hand
A fiery passion awakes in me
On this beautiful night
I am under your spell
My body shudders
At your touch, your caress
I am a volcano
Ready to erupt
Love, lust, passion
I am all that and more
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AliB
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2004-03-18 18:12:54]
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Re: I am a volcano
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:14:04 PM AEST
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well done
(way better then mine)
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Re: I am a volcano
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:35:01 AM AEST
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Told you to post it...this is brill, you can really feel the heat and passion. Really like this one
Love Dawny x |
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Re: I am a volcano
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 12:57:25 PM AEST
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Yeah i tend to have that effect! (yeah right!)
this just bubbled along.
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Re: I am a volcano
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 08:51:57 PM AEST
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| Very well written. Keep it up! |
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