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Eyes accustom to dark
Contributed by
crow
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:37:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Accustom to Dark
Couldn`t I rest here for just a minute,
Please, my hands so cold from the storm.
Maybe I could stand,
where no one will notice,
so frightened of what life has held.
A morsel of bread,
a pound of flesh,
love from one side of the fence.
Maybe you could love me forever,
never will ask to much.
Quietly waiting,
mere thoughts of a child,
eyes accustom to dark....Crow
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crow
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2004-03-18 17:37:01]
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Re: Eyes accustom to dark
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:20:39 PM AEST
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haunting a good write
Shari |
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Re: Eyes accustom to dark
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by shelby on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 07:03:14 PM AEST
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so sad hard to take it in that there are so many children feeling this way.Good to see you my friend
michelle |
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Re: Eyes accustom to dark
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by Kie on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:58:08 PM AEST
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| This brought tears to my eyes. Little children hurting and no one sees or cares just kills me. From the title to the ending this one really touched my core. Well done. Kie |
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Re: Eyes accustom to dark
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 03:12:37 AM AEST
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| This one went straight to my heart, very haunting and vivid write. It also made me mad to think that there are children out there who have no one to turn to for help. Well done. |
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