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(((ALONE)))
Contributed by
putteragain
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:14:31 PM in AEST
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I feel a coldness never felt before
shiver's my spine stands my hair
emptiness fills this room
alone i stand this space i share
rejected feelings slammed in face
abandonment issues i must address
exclusion from friends everywhere
alone am i is what i confess
with out this room filled with you
into the abyss i keep falling
deeper away i drift alone
not my name i hear you calling
fingers reaching out to you
finding only that empty space
no hands to hold me anymore
and now my past i must face
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putteragain
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2004-03-18 17:14:31]
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Re: (((ALONE)))
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:19:36 PM AEST
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I hate the thought of facing my past, every morning when i wake i close my eyes and throw the past of a cliff or some other horrible demise i can think off, we all cope in different ways! i'm just happy to be in the present.
a very good read
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Re: (((ALONE)))
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by Sarafina on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:25:24 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. It helps to know theres others that feel what I feel. |
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Re: (((ALONE)))
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by TwEeK on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:37:04 PM AEST
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Wow, thats the way i feel right now
nice poem, i like it very descriptive, like the words u used |
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Re: (((ALONE)))
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by shelby on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 07:01:59 PM AEST
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touching write but though you feel it your never ever alone Im here as far as the past thing I went through some of it myself yesterday bitter sweet I must admit but we cant taste the sweet without trying to swallow the bitter. Im here if you need me
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Re: (((ALONE)))
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by thumper on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:03:10 AM AEST
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| Very nice. You expressed lonliness in words that touch us all. And isn't that what it's all about? |
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Re: (((ALONE)))
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by Necromant on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:51:31 AM AEST
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Its a terrible thing to have to face the past.....This poem is really powerful! Amazing write! Glad to hear you're ok ;)
Anne :D |
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Re: (((ALONE)))
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 12:03:58 PM AEST
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Woah! Been there. Best thing about it is that when you get there, you realize that He is always there and never lets you go. Makes you trust Him even more. I really like this. The last stanza is the best.
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