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fate or fatal?

Contributed by dreamz on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:46:52 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Fate- We are meant to be together.
Everything happens for a reason.
Events are not in our control,
fate will take us from season to season.
We're meant to go through this hard stuff, it will only make us stronger
It will make a base for our relationship
It will make us last longer.
Bus is this fate, or is it fatal?
Fatality- Every day I'm growing weaker.
I don't know how much longer I'll make it
I love you so much and that's why I'm putting up with your *****.
You're injecting me with poison,
My body's slowly shutting down.
I'm in so much pain, I'm falling to the ground.
Your words are like a knife, stabbing me in my chest.
Please take it all back,
I don't know how much life I have left.
I see you once more and see the truth hidden in your eyes
I take your hands in mine and say goodbye.
Maybe this love love was fate, even if it lasted only a short time.
Now I'm ready to let go, I lay down, and die.
So was it fate, or was it fatal?




Copyright © dreamz ... [ 2004-03-18 16:46:52]
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Re: fate or fatal? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:52:24 PM AEST
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Well I was there once upon a time but i'm not going to offer you advice because you will have to figure it out on your own. I do hope it all works out for you and you get your hearts desire. I thought your poem was really touching. Kie


Re: fate or fatal? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarafina on Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:42:14 PM AEST
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I've been through a similar time as well. We tried to stay together but we tore each other down. Let's just say were friends and i'm with someone else. If you need to talk to some one I'll be online for a while. IM me at faithless4202000@aol


Re: fate or fatal? (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:24:20 PM AEST
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:(thats freakin sad...i unno what i'd do if my bf cheated on me...
i once read summin that might help you a little right now : Everythings ok in the end, if its not ok...then its not the end...
Great poem...i hope thing turn out the way you want them to...
-WWD




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