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The girl in the mirror
Contributed by
discantbelife
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:26:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Your so Pathetic....
You can't ever seem to do anything right
Yelling, Screaming, Disappointment
I take myself away for a while,
In a corner
Blade in one hand,
Blood dripping in the other.
Im so Overwhelmed....
Test dates are coming up, C's, D's thats all my worthless a** can get i'm so good for nothing.
She want's me out I can tell by the way she looks at me when i ask her for assurance.
Mother please.
Help Me.
No! Help Your self.
I need die,
please hit the right vein this time,
please bleed this time and don't stop
please just past out and never get up, please just die.
Why are you still here...
You are worth nothing,
Worth anything less that anything
That is anything.
I can't stand it anymore,
I cut and cut
And your still here
I drink and drink
And you still here
I abuse you, I hate you, I disown you why are you still here.
The girl in the mirror, is here to stay
All i'm trying to do is take that girl away.
ME.
Copyright ©
discantbelife
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2004-03-18 16:26:59]
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Re: The girl in the mirror
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:39:07 PM AEST
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great write.
very discribtive and emotional. and i really liked the last paragraph. mostly the lines
'The girl in the mirror, is here to stay, All i'm trying to do is take that girl away.' its all good.
awsome work.
Auryn
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Re: The girl in the mirror
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:57:21 PM AEST
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| beautiful, so sad... |
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Re: The girl in the mirror
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:10:22 PM AEST
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I feel the same way some times, but when I look in the mirror I see nothing....great write I look forword to seeing more of your peoms.
-Victoria-
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Re: The girl in the mirror
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:34:37 PM AEST
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| Thank you for writing this. It's helping me deal because I feel the same way. You put it into words beautifully! It was just a wonderful poem. Try to stick it out. Great work! |
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Re: The girl in the mirror
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:13:00 PM AEST
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I loved this seemed confusing and rambling as if u were showing us exactly what was going on in yer mind. I feel the same way 'cept I'm a guy... good poem.
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