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Felt & Feel
Contributed by
outsider
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Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 12:43:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I felt your breath on my face,
My heart started to race.
You whispered those words to me,
All around - electricity.
I felt the touch of your hand,
Minds floating never to land.
My emotions powered so strong,
The world was righted nothing wrong.
I felt your lips brushing mine
Making me feel sublime, so fine.
I feel your presence sweet and true,
I cant believe how much I love you.
I feel you feel the same as me,
I pray to God that this will be.
My love is eternal I know you know
Its meant to be lets make it so.
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outsider
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2002-07-14 12:43:01]
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Re: Felt & Feel
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by ginsdance on
Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 02:49:43 PM AEST
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I really like this poem... especially the last line.
*ginsdance* |
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Re: Felt & Feel
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by Lovingangel4u on
Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 05:55:32 PM AEST
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| Wow I love the feel of this poem. Another one of my favs. :) |
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