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Reveals
Contributed by
emptythoughts
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:40:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The smiles and laughs
can only cover so much
Dare I speak?
My voice will revel
My silence will reveal still
Dare I look?
My eyes will reveal
My eyeleds will reveal more
Dare I move?
My movement shall reveal
My hiding shall reveal more
Dare I live?
My actions will reveal
My inactivity reveals all
So as you see
a smile may be on my face
but no matter how I try
I am definately going to die
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2004-03-18 13:40:56]
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Re: Reveals
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 02:47:17 PM AEST
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man, yur hellbent on this one! oi... i'd hate to be the one in your way! lol, joking! scary on how much we can't hide sometimes... good write! ;0)
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Re: Reveals
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:36:51 PM AEST
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| why are you so sad? another amazing write though. |
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