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Poems
Contributed by
emptythoughts
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:39:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Poems of death
of suicide
of pain
and torture
Poems of dying
and lying
of trying
and crying
Poems of hell
a wish to exit
a wish to enter
Poems of escape
of causing pain
of escaping pain
of cutting myself to pieces
mentally
physically
Poems of me
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2004-03-18 13:39:49]
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Re: Poems
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by Remy on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 02:44:02 PM AEST
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sounds like a dreary journal entry... hope the dreaeryness doesn't linger on forever. ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Poems
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:09:14 PM AEST
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Poems of me...
Oh... can't u see...
Y I write... y I read...
Of these dreary things
To organize the thoughts...
To organize the pain...
This is my existence...
In this world... so vain...
I'm reaching out...
Trying to hold on...
When I'm tortured with pain...
Help me plz... don't let me go...
To fall into a world of unknowns
Just love me for who I am...
I'M ME!!!
Sorry... this just came to me as I read the last line... maybe it could me the missing verse... LOL
Hey Great write... Don't give up on urself... b/c I'n not giving up on u...! Take care...
Ur friend,
~Donna~ |
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Re: Poems
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:47:28 PM AEST
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| I feel ya! Great job. I liked the format thing you used. It was cool! I especially loved the last four lines. Wonderful write! |
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Re: Poems
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:38:22 PM AEST
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| very good empty :) keep them coming. |
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