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Contributed by
emptythoughts
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:38:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Why do people dismiss my words?
Why do they ignore my pain?
I keep it bottled up inside
until I feel as if I have already died.
Everybody steps away
as if they cannot be near
pretending as if they do not hear.
I would lower my head in shame.
Now here I stand
Gun to my head
Do you hear me now?!
I cry out in pain.
Man....I am so lame
is my last thought
as I blow out my brain.
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Re: Dismiss
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by Remy on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 02:37:33 PM AEST
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augh, more folk plenty more lame than these thoughts of yours. don't worry, there is most always one person you can count on... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Dismiss
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:13:54 PM AEST
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Don't dismiss urself just yet... there are plenty more words that better express theses feelings u have... but reach deep down inside and see if that happiness can be found... that's lurking somewhere in the background of ur heart... I'm sure it's there... just look around...
ur friend
~Donna~ |
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Re: Dismiss
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:40:15 PM AEST
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| wow that was morbid. obviously you have a few people around listening...look at the people who comment... look at the reads... empty your not alone. |
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Re: Dismiss
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by corrupted_minds on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:30:39 AM AEST
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I did exactly the same thing, i kept everything bottled up inside untill i was under a veil of darkness. The best thing you can do in this situation i would say is to talk to someone about everything before it;s tooo late.
welldone
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