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She rises
Contributed by
martynman1
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:32:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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she rises from the water
like aphroditey the greek goddess of love
her beauty calls like the sirens song
beguiels all who stand before her
i my self am mesmerised as she walks through the temple of love
just as apollo was
her beauty has stood the test of time
it is here and now amoungst us
i look in awe at this modern aphrodite of love
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2004-03-18 12:32:54]
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Re: She rises
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by Kie on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:47:44 PM AEST
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| Beautiful.... Kie |
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Re: She rises
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:55:42 PM AEST
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Captivating poem! I loved it, especially since it contains greek myth in it! Keep writing i really enjoyed this poems especially since its a lovely short one ;)
Anne :D |
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Re: She rises
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by Kittenfantastico on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:59:35 PM AEST
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| That's really an awsome piece. Gr8 work! |
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