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Look at me
Contributed by
booboo
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:15:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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with all these days passing by
i really hate to hear you lie
i'm so scared that i could cry
i can't hide anything
i'm not to sure whats
going on in my life but........
please dad take a second
look at me,what do you
see?what was it you
want me to be
i know we've lost something
in our lives i know we've
lost eachother,but we're all alright
NO matter what you
say or do,i'll always
have a clue in what to do
please dad take a second
look at me,what do you
see?what was it you
wanted me to be
if it weren't for you
i wouldn't know what do to
and i wouldn't have a clue
Copyright ©
booboo
... [
2004-03-18 12:15:22]
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Re: Look at me
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by THUGPASSION on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:29:20 PM AEST
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| NICE POEM BUT U SHOULD CHECK DA SPELLING B4 U POST IT BABY.... BUT IT IS A VERY NICE POEM I LIKE IT |
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Re: Look at me
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:29:21 PM AEST
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| NICE POEM BUT U SHOULD CHECK DA SPELLING B4 U POST IT BABY.... BUT IT IS A VERY NICE POEM I LIKE IT |
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