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Contributed by
Necromant
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:59:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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“My breath hitches when you finally make your appearance,
Your innocent smile and dreamy look captures my essence,
You’re my muse, my fountain flowing constant inspiration,
Your voice washing over my senses is a sweet intoxication”
All of this and much more I’ve always longed to tell you,
But truth be that, in the end, it all resolved to a simple adieu,
Now regret is tearing through me as I stand in front of your grave,
Oh my poor heart can’t take it any longer, if only I was more brave!
I can still remember the look you had in your eyes at the airport,
When I ran to you like a madman shouting words to inspire some support,
Why didn’t I tell you what my heart really craved? Why didn’t I tell you to stay?
Oh god why did he have to die in a hijack? Was it a price I had to pay?
Copyright ©
Necromant
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2004-03-18 11:59:57]
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Re: Stay
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by Kie on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:35:46 PM AEST
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This poem is sad but it had so much heart in it and it was really well written and expressed.
I am glad you are back and posting. Stay....You are amongst friends.
Kie |
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Re: Stay
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:43:54 PM AEST
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wow... this is REALLY good... I love it.
Welcome back! |
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Re: Stay
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by venkat on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:47:32 AM AEST
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| Oh dear friend..last lines actually hit me..my eyes are filled with tears..venkat |
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Re: Stay
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 02:51:03 AM AEST
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| Omg .. I hope this isn't true! This is a powerful write ... extremely well written .. .glad to see you back and hope to see more from you ... Jan |
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Re: Stay
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by swiftsouljah on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 12:18:54 AM AEST
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for what its worth from a ghetto boy like me im sorry... and next time put a disclaimer on the poem if its gonna make someone cry
wayne |
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Re: Stay
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by whisper-of-night on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 09:29:42 PM AEST
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| When I was reading the first half of this poem, I thought this is just another sad 'he leave me...' poem, but was surprised to find that there actually a tragic story behind it as well..... very good and powerful...... |
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Re: Stay
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:26:47 PM AEST
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Oh, wow . . . so much pure, raw, unadulterated emotion: aka, so much skillful poetry. You, Anne, are one hell of a poet.
--Nora |
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Re: Stay
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 02:39:54 PM AEST
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AN EXCELLENT POEM! THE PRICE WE PAY IS BECAUSE LIFE JUST SOMETIME SUCKS!!
SORRY ABOUT THE OUT COME BUT AT LEAST YOU HAD IT IN YOUR HEART!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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