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Rusted Soul.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:58:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Behind locked doors,
lies a girls on fire,
hands tied together,
with rusty warbed wire.
mouth gagged,
with old dirty cloth,
she's burned and broken...
away, fly's a moth.
bloodied and beaten,
with melted flesh,
bruised and bleeding,
it's a scary mess...!!
still, she dies so quickly,
in her burning lair,
the flames upon her,
as souls to stare!
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deathdrop
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2004-03-18 11:58:54]
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Re: Rusted Soul.
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:47:49 PM AEST
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Oh my what a tragic poem! The imagery is really vivid. The poem is very well written I enjoyed reading it (not because of the meaning bheehe its very tragic... just the way you've wrote it) Great write keep it up!
Anne :D |
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Re: Rusted Soul.
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by corrupted_minds on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:27:42 AM AEST
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| from the word go you suked me in with your heading rusty souls, nice |
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