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Moonlight
Contributed by
bear8807
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:04:14 AM in AEST
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The half moon fades
I see her in a different shade
The full comes to view
Her hand slowly glides away from mine
The full moon fades
Can you go on without her kiss
because till the day you die
Darkness is BLISS
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Re: Moonlight
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:15:37 PM AEST (User
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don't be sorry, this is good writing.... i like it, short and swet. ;0)
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Re: Moonlight
(User Rating: 1 ) by poeticjestix on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 02:04:27 AM AEST (User
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everyone's favourite poem is cliche'd in some way. Guilty pleasure like playing the eagles in the car with the window up just in case anyone hears. |
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