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To Erzsébeth
Contributed by
Hurretje
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:38:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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They say I’m a liar
Because they’ve never seen you
They only have my words
That fail to describe you
Your hair’s a black corona
Deep dark silhouette against the moonless sky
Drinking the moonlight
Your eyes
Emeralds that make the jungle fade
Bottomless pools
I’ve sunk to depths
Where the sun is silent
And the stars hide
Your mouth
Ruby abundance
That makes me speechless
Speaking only through poetry
My sole refuge
Your skin
Only Procol Harum could
Put the right words to it
They think you’re weird
Because you want mé
I excel in cliches
To grasp what’s unfathomable
You dance when you walk
Slowly, elastically, electrically
Silent whispering in my mind
All the cats hide when you move
In embarrassment
They close their eyes
You prowl, fast unseen lightning
Black panthers have always copied you
In poor imitation
They consider me a mental
When the sun and clouds played their games
We played ours, chasing black and white
But now I stay inside
Wisdom in its purest form
Your words caress my ears
Trembling with knowledge
That draws near divinity
Drenched with pain
For no human to bear
You were Solomon’s
Source of inspiration
They call you a fabrication
Someone who cannot exist
They call me a geeky wanker
Someone that should not exist *soft giggling*
Your love
Stripped from quotidian frills
Copious
Your love
Excavates my soul
Devours my being
They state
I’d been acting strange for a while
They state
I’d been delirious about some psycho lately
You are known
From movies and books
But no one begs for your signature
You are the dark side
Of the past, presence and future
Your anchors pierce time
The reflection of the sun is still in my eyes
You gorge this forbidden flavor
Golden memory
From now on
We will face the moon
And ethereal eternity
Copyright ©
Hurretje
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2004-03-18 09:38:48]
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Re: To Erzsébeth
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:21:09 AM AEST
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| Excellent flow..good talent..lovely write..I am really impressed..venkat |
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Re: To Erzsébeth
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:21:26 AM AEST
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| O_O I'm amazed. Excellent imagery, this great Cruel Countess sounds ethereal. The whole poem has a nice rhythm that pulls you in from beginning to end. Nice job. |
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Re: To Erzsébeth
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:04:12 PM AEST
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| This poem left me completely in lust for the signature of it's subject. The melody of it stung my eyes and had my heart racing. I have read nothing better then this, and I have read many. Your talent is overwhelmingly ethereal. |
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