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Being Noticed
Contributed by
jupiter
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:26:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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People walk by me,
Not talking to me,
Not noticing me
Their are times,
Where I feel alone,
That I'll talk to anyone
Some times I'm talked to,
But only insults come out,
And I wish insults never exsisted
Everything I say,
Ends up turned against me,
And some times gets me in trouble
All I wish for,
Is for people to leave me alone,
Or be friends with me
After people know me,
I'm not that bad,
But I just want to be noticed
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jupiter
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2004-03-18 09:26:45]
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Re: Being Noticed
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 09:54:18 AM AEST
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That's about as heartfelt a thing as I've ever read. Dont we all just want to be " noticed " in life.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Being Noticed
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:54:59 AM AEST
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Alot of people goes through what your going through .And i do feel bad for you .I feel like that sometimes but hey if people don't want to get to know you it's there lost.nice write .
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Re: Being Noticed
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by Kie on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:58:15 AM AEST
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| This hit me straight in the heart. Brought tears to my eyes and very powerful to read. It struck alike accord inside of me. When I was growing up I wanted to be noticed and when I finally was noticed I was so wrapped up in my childhood insecurities that I couldn't believe I was worth noticing. We all want to be noticed and this poem just broke my heart. I think it is one of your best. Kie |
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