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By Faith Guided
Contributed by
starlight_dancer
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 05:57:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A love beyond an ocean vast
The feeling flourishing, growing fast
Further than stars glittering in the dark
Bonding together, forming a new spark
Two halves making each other whole
Two halves together, complete a soul
Our love blossoming from each epoch
Growing closer together, every hour on the clock
Living out a dream come true
Living blissfully, this feeling new
So lucky to receive this God given gift
Bringing such mirth, giving life a lift
The Lord guiding us, combining our trails
With each other and God, we cannot fail
Together forever, without a shadow of a doubt
With him so happy, cannot live without
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Re: By Faith Guided
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:04:18 AM AEST
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Wow Sarah. Love and emotion radiate from this piece. This really is an artwork, one of the best (and most romantic) i've read.
"The Lord guiding us, combining our trails
With each other and God, we cannot fail"...that part just melted me! Exceptional writing, smooth flow, and excellent rhyme (especially epoch/clock).
Brilliant job, your talent only continues to grow and astound.
Love always and forever,
-Dan
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Re: By Faith Guided
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:15:20 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading that. thanks |
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Re: By Faith Guided
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:47:59 AM AEST
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How loving, how kind, sincere and filled with hope!
Blissful love with sparks flying to and fro...
I'm so glad you can experience this marvelous feeling you two as you go!
Wonderfully written poem......I loved reading
of two hearts joining and feeling.......
So many today are going just the opposite way
Let nothing in all this world hold you back from
loving one another...bless your hearts from
one that knows hearts together!
love, and blessings
consue
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Re: By Faith Guided
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by Pwei on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:53:40 PM AEST
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Sarah,
Remember love can cover any distance and beat every obstacle. Reading this poem I know you believe it!
"Come sail your ships around me, and burn my bridges down, Nick Cave.
Emotion can break down any barrier!
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Re: By Faith Guided
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 12:59:43 PM AEST
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| absolutely amazing piece... |
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