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cheer up
Contributed by
idiotbox
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Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 01:36:19 PM in AEST
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cheer up sweetie
tomorrow is another day
and there is always the next and the next
its all about the future
what does it hold
where will it take you
thats all up to you.
but i know the sun still rises
and sets and the trees still
sway in the breeze.
and love might be just around the corner
so smile even when ur heart is breaking
and laugh when u don't want to.
things will always get better
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Re: cheer up
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 01:58:56 PM AEST
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Well...it didn't cheer me up THAT much...but thanks for the effort. :) I did enjoy it...I love the flow of the first 3 lines of the second stanza! you know, the more times I read it, the more cheered up I feel...maybe if I read it over and over for a few hours I'll be downright happy! lol
Thanks for brightening up a sky filled with storm clouds. :)
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: cheer up
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by idiotbox on
Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 02:03:09 PM AEST
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| Thanks for the sarcasm! |
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Re: cheer up
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by Mystery_Girl on
Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 08:38:52 PM AEST
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| Enjoy I did....This is inspiring and encouraging and a good read and thanks for posting this....u have a cheery day also...Tanya....:-) |
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Re: cheer up
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 16th September 2002 @ 09:10:06 PM AEST
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Awww..sweet write..have a great day also....
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Re: cheer up
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 17th September 2002 @ 03:39:16 AM AEST
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| Weeee this was full of smiles!! I loved it :) |
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Re: cheer up
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 17th September 2002 @ 05:03:35 AM AEST
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| aww...that's sweet... but it didn't do it for me either... nice try though... still a good write! |
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Re: cheer up
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 01:19:42 PM AEST
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it doesn't matter what others syaI think it's beautiful!
Amy |
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Re: cheer up
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by idiotbox on
Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 02:46:39 PM AEST
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| thanks amy |
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