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Falling Away
Contributed by
stalkee
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 09:48:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You destroy me with a glance
And it hurts to think of you,
hurts this childs heart
It feels like we are falling away
These tears burn
I used to have so many nights
Only spent in lonely
The goal of my life is the goal I can't reach
The fire in me is burning out
The destruction of me is 'cause of you
These words...
I wish they could fly over to you
You destroy me with a glance
And my body starts crumbling,
somewhere deep inside
Can we not go back to how we were?
These tears burn
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stalkee
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2004-03-17 21:48:18]
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Re: Falling Away
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:26:27 PM AEST
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Very touching....well done...
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Re: Falling Away
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:51:54 PM AEST
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| If I could I would give you a great big hug. ((hugs)) This was so touching and so much pain expressed. Hang in there okay? Keep on writing! Enjoyed this one. Kie |
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Re: Falling Away
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:31:48 PM AEST
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such hurt...but a well done piece
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Re: Falling Away
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:56:27 PM AEST
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this was really good... I enjoyed the imagery
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Re: Falling Away
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:58:44 AM AEST
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| Sad, awfully sad. |
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