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If You Weren't On Your Way
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 09:03:45 PM in AEST
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Under dark starless sky
No one'll hear if I'll cry
I can let my emotions free
When there's no more You & Me
I won't burn your picture
Or erase my memories
I don't hate as I thought I would
I said I'd get over, I wish I could
What's done is done
And you're long gone
Few new things I'd share
If you still did care
Few old things I'd say
If you weren't on your way
I wish I didn't let it go by
And don't you think I'd try
To fix this if I could
But I'm not sure I should
There's already enough tears
And I learned to live with my fears
Can't change what's in the past
Can't make work something that won't last
What's done is done
And you're long gone
Few new things I'd share
If you still did care
Few old things I'd say
If you weren't on your way
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2004-03-17 21:03:45]
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Re: If You Weren't On Your Way
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by Twitch06 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:45:10 AM AEST
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Those are great lyrics. when i read ur song, i imagined something that happend in my life similar to this. Anyways, great poem/song, keep it up!
~Kristen
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Re: If You Weren't On Your Way
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:46:37 AM AEST
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This is great! It's like... nostalgic acceptance. The thoughts and images in this are awesome. Keep up the good work!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: If You Weren't On Your Way
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by faithmairee on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:26:55 AM AEST
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a hauntingly beautiful poem...sad but deep...i can relate well to this one...
faith |
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Re: If You Weren't On Your Way
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by Kirby on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 09:45:08 PM AEST
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| I seriously cried to this poem becasue it represents what exactly I am going through and that's a hard thing for me to write so i really did like this poem. You are a very emotional poet and it is great what comes out on paper when you write. Love:::Kirby |
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