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CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 06:04:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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"CAN YOU READ HEARTS?"
One swallow, two sighs, turn right.
Listen to it's beat, my heart's homesite.
Straight to follow, a clean loving sweep.
Steep incline, still waters, dangerously deep!
Two hearts you will find if only you'll peek.
Heart of a poet, seat of motivation, mystique.
"Mind's Eye," is it's partner, heart plus mind...
Facon de parlner, figure of speech, combined
Another heart, literally small, fist size.
A mighty muscle, pumps our blood relies.
Touching this material heart, scientists find.
May affect both hearts, finely entwined.
An open wound inflicted, heart surgery.
Literal muscle traumatized, easily cries, amply
Figurative heart's emotions involved closer now.
Bleeding heart, feelings surface, more endow.
What's in another person's heart easy seeks
"For out of a heart's abundance, his mouth speaks!"
"Good hearts bring forth good treasure."
"Hearts of bad bring forth vulgar, rotten verdure!
Poet's hearts seen plainly, poems on paper written
Sad, burdened, depressed, hurting heart,
down trodden.,
Witty, joyful, funny, clown-like,
affectionate, and loving.
Hearts of want, searching, pleading,
bleeding, longing........
Open hearts written down for all to view.
Positive hearts lift, up-build, everyone,
mostly you!'
Dark Hearts pull hearts down, blues bestrew!
Hearts that are guarded carefully,
lovingly rescue.
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
March 15, 2004
"Let your heart's love abound!"
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Quotes from the Bible
Sayings of Jesus,
"Reader of Hearts."
Luke 6:45
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 06:47:56 PM AEST
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Wow! I love this - a great poem.
Thanks for sharing
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 07:10:15 PM AEST
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great poem ....love it
Shari |
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 08:08:40 PM AEST
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| I remember you saying to me that when your good you can see the good in other people. Is it the same way with hearts? Well I think you have a wonderful heart and you radiate all things good. I look forward to the next one. Kie |
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 09:03:33 PM AEST
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I have to agree 100% with Kie and also include her as a loving heart and many others I have found on this site. You write so beautifully, Connie. No one can deny that.
Lots of hugs,
Rita |
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 09:13:42 PM AEST
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I agree 100% with the others... great write connie.. keep up the good work
~Donna~ |
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 09:51:00 PM AEST
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| WOW! Critters, this is such a beautiful write. It's so true. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:40:49 PM AEST
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Have To Agree With Everyone Else
A~W~E~S~O~M~E poem
Loved It Great Write.....
Also Very True......
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:47:11 AM AEST
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ENCORE,ENCORE! THAT IS A WORK OF ART!! SURELY TO SET OFF A SPARK TO ONES HEART!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:47:29 AM AEST
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| Wow this was so well thought out & done! Beautiful! Loved it! Christina |
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 03:17:54 PM AEST
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Upon what hopes do we pin,
the tell-tale of our heart's beating,
alas the coin often ends its spin,
in the domain none deem worth receiving.
I wonder why I wrote the above... but I dunno.. it just springs out as I am reading your work. I guess that is the color of my heart perhaps...unleashed by your wonderful poetic song. Nice poem. you are right.... the heart is a wondrous instrument scientifically and in the domains of art and feelings. But it is also a major cause of death( heart attack) and the well of all the pains of emotion. |
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by emystar on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 10:30:03 PM AEST
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Wwwwwoooooo momma,
U got a big heart with all seeing eyes.
Luv, hugs, your brat,
emy |
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Re: CAN YOU READ HEARTS?
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:46:30 PM AEST
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Ah yes, the poets see. So hard to live with those non poets. We struggle so to communicate with them. I love this. You have laid it all out so clearly and beautifully.
Stitch |
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