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Raven
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:03:27 PM in AEST
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Sorry that I'm not everything you'd like me to be,
sorry I'm not perfect and don't match your criteria.
You have no idea how much you hurt me each day,
making me live up to those pictures in the media.
I'm the Raven in your heart and the shadow in the dark,
the nail in your coffin but its tearing me apart.
This day has gone old and stale, ever so suddenly,
the moody music is playing, every note touches my soul.
Tell me who the Hell you would like me to be,
just to break me wide open again.
Just to use me, abuse me, lead me to a trap,
and when all the glitter fades away........
I will once again be left alone.
Copyright ©
broken-glass
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2004-03-17 15:03:27]
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Re: Raven
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 05:00:32 PM AEST
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Lots of anger in this one and WOW did you make a strong point. I loved this line---
"the moody music is playing, every note touches my soul."
Kie
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Re: Raven
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by Kittie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 05:25:01 PM AEST
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| I wasnt expecting this write from the title very strong emotions expressed here I could feel as I read great write |
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Re: Raven
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:43:06 AM AEST
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| so powerful. i hope writing that created some kind of realisation; u shouldnt feel like that, no one should. never conform to the ideal. but i love the poem x |
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