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Why?
Contributed by
ChaosBound
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:37:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Damnation
Redemption
Salvation
for me
Gloomy
Stormy
Bloody
when free
Hopeless
Tearless
Help less
i cry
Breathless
Lifeless
Souless
i die
Tearful
Hateful
Watchful
this cant be
Hiding
Crying
Dieing
why me?
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ChaosBound
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2004-03-17 13:37:17]
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Re: Why?
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:43:17 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. you are a good writer- keep it up. I look forward to reading more |
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Re: Why?
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:47:24 PM AEST
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| Why not? We all gotta. Are you valuable enough to keep alive forever? What can, or better yet, Who can keep us alive forever? Anyhow, a good little thought provoking poem. God Bless |
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Re: Why?
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:48:07 PM AEST
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| Why not? We all gotta. Are you valuable enough to keep alive forever? What can, or better yet, Who can keep us alive forever? Anyhow, a good little thought provoking poem. God Bless |
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Re: Why?
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by Dezray on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:20:11 PM AEST
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| This is a very touching poem. Keep it up. |
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