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My Date
Contributed by
Jackee_line
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:07:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I need to hurry
I have a date.
Need to get ready.
But
I can't leave
to many things needs to be done.
I have to get organized,
need to think
everything is cloudy.
I can't forget anything,
all has to be in order.
But
It's sure taking forever
It must be done
before I can relax
and think of what I will do.
My date!
a pen, a will, a bottle of pills.
But only when I am done.
Copyright ©
Jackee_line
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2004-03-17 13:07:42]
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Re: My Date
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:13:58 PM AEST
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such sad anticipation and a macarbe reality
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Re: My Date
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:35:08 PM AEST
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Ouch....very good write..... the run-on lines emphasise the theme of the poem so well....
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Re: My Date
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by bernard on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 10:01:28 AM AEST
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I hope that this is just a poem otherwise you are in a sad state of mind. Cheer up every cloud has a silver lining one must just be patient.
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Re: My Date
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by venkat on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:53:11 AM AEST
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| Aww..Beauty, you are in a hurry..please take care..venkat |
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