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Life
Contributed by
ivy
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:08:45 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Vast like an ocean,
Deep like a sea.
Small like a river,
Life seems to me.
Like the droplets of rain,
Like the still water that is so plain.
Like a canal which is steep,
This is how sometimes life seems to me.
Life is like a tide that is sometimes high
and is sometimes low,
which makes the water dance;
and also stay still for days to go.
Life is filled with pleasure,
and loads of pressure.
It is sometimes light,
and sometimes bright as a new light.
Copyright ©
ivy
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2004-03-17 12:08:45]
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:26:50 PM AEST
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Cool observation on your part Ivy, that's a very good write. Keep up the good work,
Danny |
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Re: Life
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:28:44 PM AEST
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| A perfect poem. Loved the third stanza. Great job on this one. Kie |
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Re: Life
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:35:26 PM AEST
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Life is so simple... y do we complicate it so much... Great write... keep up the good work..
~Donna~ |
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Re: Life
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by The_Poet on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:14:06 AM AEST
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| Quite true you said there..!! I guess, its just a phase!!! Like I say, when the tide is high, just be sure to be in front of it.. so yu can surf !!! |
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