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confident
Contributed by
merry
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:54:28 AM in AEST
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do I give away too much?
no answer in the afternoon
I try to remember
time and space
is not the same
I race to the edge
confident
I can put on the brakes
in time to save myself
from falling
overboard
down the green cliffs
swallowed up and broken
confident
that you will grab me
hold me to your heart
with tenderness
do I expect too much?
no answer in the afternoon
I am adrift
in the quiet room
where I wait for you
confident
that you will come
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-03-17 11:54:28]
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Re: confident
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:40:23 PM AEST
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Another beautiful echo.
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Re: confident
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:53:30 PM AEST
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| This was so full of heart it just brought tears to my eyes. Really touched me. Kie |
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Re: confident
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 03:18:46 AM AEST
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| I really relate to this! ... "confidently confused" and waiting, waiting, waiting ... but still sure that he will come ... frustration beyond compare ... excellent write Merry ... *daisies* Jan |
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Re: confident
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:48:09 AM AEST
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The only thing I'm waiting on is a hot cuppa and a smoke at this hour of the morning...hehehe ok ok, I'll be serious, have patience my daisy, things are going to turn out fine ;)
Roses
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