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In Your Eyes
Contributed by
evryrose
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:51:17 AM in AEST
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I listen to your breathing
The rise and fall of your chest
In sync with mine
You are so beautiful to watch
I gaze into your eyes
And there I find myself
And who I want to become
It is the place I find myself looking for
When I need reassurance
When I need you
There is not only you looking back piercing my whole Being, but there is where I am
The residence of my future
In your eyes
Copyright ©
evryrose
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2004-03-17 02:51:17]
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Re: In Your Eyes
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by intelectualpoet on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:54:43 AM AEST
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| I'm taken aback baby, really am speachless, you have yet again expressed what I was feeling, but couldnt find the words to express it...I love you |
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Re: In Your Eyes
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:01:35 AM AEST
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THAT'S SO PRETTY & ROMANTIC YOU HAVE A GREAT HEART TO WRITE WITH!
DAN!! |
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Re: In Your Eyes
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:24:53 AM AEST
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Really A~W~E~S~O~M~E~
Write I Feel These Same Feeling's
Towards The Man I Love...
It's Hard SomeTimes To Express
Your True Feeling's...
Nice Write Loved It.......
............Love...........AnGeL...........
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Re: In Your Eyes
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by Pompous on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:37:10 AM AEST
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written beautifully and sweetly well done I love it
Neal |
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Re: In Your Eyes
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by faithmairee on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 08:18:44 PM AEST
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this was so beautiful and a true joy to read...you have a nice writing style...i really like it.
faith |
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