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It's Better This Way
Contributed by
Dina
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:42:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I have a strange feeling
don't know if it has a meaning
but my heart is really beating
and I don't know the cause.
What is it with me
what could it be
I'll wait and see
I hope it's good.
I had that feeling before
said I don't want it anymore
left it by the shore
I guess it came back again.
What do I do
I have no choice
shall I accept it
shall I reject it
I don't know.
I don't want it like last time
I don't even know who I am
I am not the old me
not like I used to be
and it's all because of that
No, I won't give in
I won't repeat the sin.
This time I'll let it go
I will stand up and say no
I will not be happy though
but it's better this way.
Copyright ©
Dina
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2004-03-17 01:42:01]
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Re: It's Better This Way
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by Remy on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:43:40 AM AEST
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augh, so many conflicting emotions - always a bear!! but good expression, i like this! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: It's Better This Way
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:08:27 AM AEST
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YOU SHOULD BE HAPPY,BECAUSE YOU WRITE REALLY WELL! ALOT OF EXPRESSION & POWER!! A VERY NICE WRITE!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: It's Better This Way
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:20:17 AM AEST
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This Is An A~w~E~s~O~m~E Poem !!!!
Loved It.....Very Nice Write....
.........Love........AnGeL........ |
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Re: It's Better This Way
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 07:20:52 PM AEST
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You have put my thoughts so perfectly into the form of a poem.
*Envy* This was excellent. I could relate to every word, and it just clicked with me. Maybe another? Hope so... Kie |
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