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My Spring of Tears
Contributed by
twinkletoes
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:02:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am sitting on this creek bank hidden by a canopy
of a lush and heavy rainforest
dimming sunlight
of the day.
The deep and darkened waters of a rock pool cool inviting
are being fed from above by a spring
falling gaily as
if to play.
Etching forming hidden gutters and cravasses deep a-plenty,
this spring has made its mark forever
upon the hardened
lime.
The half-lit hue is heavy with the sound of running water
as day-by-day this tranquil scene
is repeated on through
time.
But what does all this do me in my dungeon filled with sorrow
as your words come to me in agony
I've found I've let you down
yet again.
Can I not hold your heart without condition placed upon me,
can you never know the joy and beauty of my love?
Why stay in those sad dreams written
by your pen?
Backdrop mountains guard your heart, battlements wide and high
whose gums stand guard along your mountains brow,
is never to be crossed nor broken by this
foolish man.
So I am sitting on this creek bank hiding from the truth
the truth placed here for all to see and read
I hang my head in sorrow and cry
once again.
Copyright ©
twinkletoes
... [
2004-03-17 01:02:02]
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Re: My Spring of Tears
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by Remy on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:31:25 AM AEST
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sad... poetically sad, but SAD! *sigh* it is pretty and poetic, so i guess writing about it could help... yea. good write! ;0)
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Re: My Spring of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:45:13 AM AEST
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| Sad... but wonderfully written.. venkat |
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Re: My Spring of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:05:59 AM AEST
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you certainly know how to write the sad stuff nice one
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Re: My Spring of Tears
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:13:43 AM AEST
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NICELY WRITTEN AS IF NOTHING WAS MISSING! REALLY A GREAT ONE!!
DAN!!!
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Re: My Spring of Tears
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 05:17:51 AM AEST
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| Your spring of tears is my well of sorrow ... and still I say to you ... "I would dance naked in your heart" ... show me the way ... ~~~~>>> |
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Re: My Spring of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:42:44 PM AEST
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Hi tt; at least you can write about it. That is always a good catharsis for me. Nice write.
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Re: My Spring of Tears
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 06:25:03 PM AEST
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I can say your heart flowed through your pen on this one. Beautifully written my friend.
My friend needs a drink, hook him up barkeep
Larry |
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Re: My Spring of Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:05:23 PM AEST
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exquisitly sadly beautiful and breathtaking, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Spring of Tears
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by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:35:18 PM AEST
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So vivid and brilliant, Very nice write!
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Re: My Spring of Tears
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 11:13:40 PM AEST
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| so melancholy..I'll join you in that drink. |
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