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First Love's Conclusion
Contributed by
mylosthoughts
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:33:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She puts on her makeup and fakes a smile
Hiding her broken heart behind her pride
Hoping that these feelings will fade in a while
But she knows she’s lost and broken inside
He sits with his head buried in his hands
The drops of rain intertwine with his tears
Losing the only one thatcould understand
And watching his only hope disappear
The frailty of first love’s conclusion
How it feels to kindle loves dying flame
Left with heartache, sorrow and confusion
Living a lie that can never be the same
Time will mend shattered dreams and broken hearts
But nothing can hide first loves deepest scars
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mylosthoughts
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2004-03-17 00:33:10]
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Re: First Love's Conclusion
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:39:57 AM AEST
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Great write ! Thankfully we all get another chance at love.But you always remember your first,maybe your second or your third,but always your first~Thanks for sharing,keep posting and welcome to the site ;O)
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Re: First Love's Conclusion
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 07:00:25 AM AEST
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A~W~E~S~O~M~E Write
Loved It,,,,I can Remember My First Love
Never Will Forget It...
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: First Love's Conclusion
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:51:58 AM AEST
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Does anyone ever really get over their first love? Probably not... Great Poem...
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