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Dreams shatterd
Contributed by
Juggalette_chick666pk
on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 07:23:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My life long dream,
Shatterd into pieces,
The lid has been shut,
My eyes are closed,
I take a deep breath,
I jump.
My Life flashes before my eyes,
I see the love of my life,
But it's too late,
I've mad up my mind,
This world doesn't want me,
My family doesn't either,
If I could go back I would have never been born,
But I've been deseved so many times,
Lied to and cheated on,
But I can't change the past,
But I can change the future,
Hello my death,
And Goodbye everyone.
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Juggalette_chick666pk
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2004-03-16 19:23:24]
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Re: Dreams shatterd
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 08:37:39 PM AEST
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| i really like your poem,,it's heart touching.. |
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Re: Dreams shatterd
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:44:06 AM AEST
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| Wow, another suicide poem... didn't see that comming. Seriously, if you want your poetry to improve you have to improve yourself and stop wallowing. |
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