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Cutting
Contributed by
emptythoughts
on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 07:09:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The words cut through my mind like a knife
numbing my thoughts and my actions
The thoughts fill my head
The tears fill my eyes
My hand shakes and trembles
as I lift up my tool
The scissors
A knife
Or even a nail file
The cool metal touches my skin
I run it across
over and over
like the thoughts in my head
The pain in my mind slowly gives way
to the pain on my arm
It rushes through me
like a cool breeze on a summer day
I continue to carve.
I cause my pain.
It is in my control.
I continue until i feel
that i can cut no more.
And now my arm bleeds
and my thoughts are of shame.
I pull down my sleeves
and block out the pain.
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2004-03-16 19:09:30]
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Re: Cutting
(User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 07:19:56 PM AEST
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But ur pain is still there... even after u've cut...
And pulled down ur sleeves
Still staring u in the face... each time u try to erase
That which is bottled up inside
That which u try and hide
What good does it do?
U'r reminded each time... by the scars u have
Not only those with out... but those within...
U did a good job with the poem... expessing yourself... but I still don't understand the concept behind... cutting... it's all a great big ? mark to me...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Cutting
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 07:23:59 PM AEST
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| I know EXACTLY how you feel! I thought you expressed yourself very well through this poem, it is very wel written. I do this, 'bout, evryother day! I understand, good job! |
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Re: Cutting
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:42:48 PM AEST
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| wow, very great way of saying that... i used to be a cutter... i wrote a poem about it... it's called Skin... lemme know what you think... GREAT WRITE |
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